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夜劍 2008-1-26 14:54

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[b][color=red][color=purple]I think english is good and interesting.

I always will go to buy some english books to read.[/color]

Because I want to learn more vocab.

Sometimes,I will come here to talk with other peoples.

But i am not happy about only a few people come here to talk.

[/color][color=seagreen]Beacuse I think this board is very good for us to partise our poor english.

I suggest we can tell our friends who is interesting in english or who is want to partise their english come here.

Or we can always come here to talk.[/color][/b]

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yukitsu 2008-1-26 15:44

[quote]原帖由 [i]夜劍[/i] 於 2008-1-26 14:54 發表 [url=http://www.kyohk.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=4425456&ptid=585095][img]http://www.kyohk.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
I think english is good and interesting.

I always will go to buy some english books to read.

Because I want to learn more vocab.

Sometimes,I will come here to talk with other peoples.

But  ... [/quote]

Since this is an English sub-forum. Grammar and spelling is a must.
You should always read over what you typed before you post it, I noticed that you have a few errors.
[b][color=red][color=purple]I think english is good and interesting.

I always [u]will go to(don't need this) [/u]buy some english books to read. [/color]

Because I want to learn more [u]vocab.(spell the whole thing)[/u]

Sometimes,I will come here to talk with other [u]peoples.(people is already a plural)[/u]

But i am not happy about (that there are) only a few people come here to talk.

[/color][color=seagreen][u]Beacuse[/u] I think this board is very good for us to [u]partise[/u] our poor [u]english(capital language and country)[/u].

I suggest we can tell our friends who [u]is(friend is plural, so it should be are here)[/u] interesting in english or who [u]is(take this out)[/u] want to [u]partise(hmm, it's spelled practice or practise, I thought you just had a typo)[/u] their english (to) come here.

Or we can always come here to talk. (Sentence fragment, or is a coordinating conjunction, which is used to connect two main clauses or ideas. You only have one idea, so you shouldn't use or. If you want to use that, you must connect it to the previous idea.)[/color][/b]

夜劍 2008-1-26 22:54

thank you for your remind.
sometimes I will post some eng writing homeowork to here.
Can you help me to check?
Or can you do my teacher?
Do you have msn?:092:

yukitsu 2008-1-27 04:26

Sure, I don't mind helping you with homework.
My msn is [email]yuki_lite@hotmail.com[/email].

"Or can you do my teacher?"
You want me to teach you right...
Because the way you wrote it there, it means that can I have sex with your teacher, XD.

夜劍 2008-1-27 15:45

hi
oh
You are not Hong Kong people.
Your english is very good.
I think your english is the best in kyo......:079:
Please always check my poor english.:097: :100:

yukitsu 2008-1-28 01:23

I am not the best. There are many people out there who are way better than me.
However, I have been studying in Canada for seven years now.
I'll help you.

You should say, "Oh, you are not from Hong Kong."

夜劍 2008-1-28 17:49

Oh, you are not from Hong Kong
But I think we can be a good friends.

StevenK 2008-1-28 19:40

i think that you nedd read more books

夜劍 2008-1-28 19:48

[quote]原帖由 [i]StevenK[/i] 於 2008-1-28 19:40 發表 [url=http://bbs.kyohk.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=4442649&ptid=585095][img]http://bbs.kyohk.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
i think that you nedd read more books [/quote]

I am sorry about that I don't know what is "nedd" ...
I think my english is too poor.:095:

yukitsu 2008-1-28 23:27

[quote]原帖由 [i]夜劍[/i] 於 2008-1-28 19:48 發表 [url=http://www.kyohk.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=4442719&ptid=585095][img]http://www.kyohk.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]


I am sorry about that I don't know what is "nedd" ...
I think my english is too poor.:095: [/quote]

He typed it wrong. He probably meant "you need to read more books."

夜劍 2008-1-29 20:49

oh.
I see.
I think he is too careless.
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